Similes Done Well

What is a favorite simile for you? I read this the other day:

It was a day of glassy calm in the Strait of Gibraltar. The sea was like a silver shield, the sky like a bowl of sapphire, with the mountains of Africa on the one hand, the mountains of Spain on the other as dark serrations on the horizon.

 -Mr. Midshipman Hornblower, by C.S. Forester

 Similes are so easy to ruin. But nicely done, they are art. And Forester is an artist, in my opinion. I usually prefer metaphors, I think in part because of ugly similes I’ve met in the past.

I welcome any and all passersby to enter one or more examples of similes well done.

Thank you!

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2 comments so far

  1. Slightly demented on

    He was all over it like flies on poop.

    BTW – If this offends anyone, my apologies.

  2. bobbyorr on

    LOL

    It is descriptive and communicates. It is nice to know one’s simile is in no danger of being accused of kitsch!


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